Audition page one

World's worst comic page ever! Yay, at least it's done, the next page should be better. Freaking doors and hallways and what not, backgrounds bah! Who needs 'em!

FYI, just to remind reads, Aron's world is very militaristic, just a good thing to keep in mind while reading.

For my watchers who don't know what the heck this is, it's my first audition page for the OCT,

Here's the next page [link]